@PUBLIQclopant
So that’s pretty much it for Luna Luna is gone for good? Well that.. really disappoints me um.. yeah..
Was kind of hoping she got a similar scene where she unleashed her own darkness when seeing someone she loves got hurt badly.
Um.. yeah sorry about the reaction there..
@nightshroud96
Eventually, I hope to make it into a real fic.
The relevant parts for the lead-up to this scene:
Twilight and Princess Luna investigate why every unicorn whose magic specializes in time travel mysteriously goes missing.
On their way back to Equestria from one of their travels, they find out the answer: everypony who travels through the times between time eventually gets an urgent message of “The Princess is dying: send immediate aid” followed by a spell on how to teleport to totally bizarre coordinates
They waste no time teleporting to rescue Celestia.
JK, it was in invitation to Luna’s demise at the hooves of the Nightmare (which is the same corrupting entity as the Pony of Shadows in this story). Luna immediately returns to Canterlot to let Celestia know that the message that time travelers eventually receive is for her death sometime in Equestria’s future and not a current threat to either Princess. Twilight, however, is trapped with the rest of the time-traveling ponies. The original draft had Luna teleport directly into her demise like a trap, rather than witness her future self and the Nightmare destroy each other. I changed it when I moved from branching timelines to stable time loops and that required Luna to be there twice.
A while later (between 2 weeks and 20 years, still working on the exact timelines), Shadow Princess Twilight returns and banishes Luna to her grand exit scene.
Princess Celestia just witnessed her sister, who she had waited 1,000 years to return and looked forward to ruling together for another thousand, get yote within 20 years of her return by a malevolent entity who dared to use a corrupted likeness of one of her many faithful students who tragically vanished. She does not engage any of the usual self-preserving power regulation (in my story, very bad things happen to a unicorn who severely overdrafts her magic).
After she had her unlimited power (if only for 30 seconds), the reality that both Luna and Twilight are gone gone hits her and she is catatonically depressed for the rest of the story. Cadence takes over the day-to-day duties of governing Equestria until Flurry Heart is old enough to be Celestia’s body double for PR duties.
If this sounds way too complicated, you’re absolutely correct. Don’t try to devise plotlines involving multiple time travelers and attempt to keep any internal consistency to your story.
@nightshroud96
This is a plot point in my story outline. It also includes a visceral description (from Celestia’s PoV) of the gold melting and the jewels running down her face.
Theif: “N-now lets not be too hasty here, it was just an honest mistake…”
Celestia: “Oh my dear little pony, had you just broken into the bit vault I MAY have forgiven you. But no, you broke into my CAKE vault, and in doing so your explosives destroyed ALL of my cakes, some of which are no longer made! I am afraid mercy and forgive just isn’t an option!
It’s a cool pic, dude.
Well, I mean… well you know what I mean.
You deserve a lot more 1k upvotes on your drawings tbh.
We may be mad, but you…you are…No Ordinary Pony. ;D
It was you, who was the mad lad all along.
Mad with talent.
It cannot be, oh my gosh! You mad lads!!!
I have a story in my head with multiple time travelers and it’s consistent.
Bleh.. I realized I messed up my post(double “Luna” there) and I can’t edit it.
The story really will earn its “tragedy” and “downer ending” tags.
So that’s pretty much it for Luna Luna is gone for good? Well that.. really disappoints me um.. yeah..
Was kind of hoping she got a similar scene where she unleashed her own darkness when seeing someone she loves got hurt badly.
Um.. yeah sorry about the reaction there..
Eventually, I hope to make it into a real fic.
The relevant parts for the lead-up to this scene:
If this sounds way too complicated, you’re absolutely correct. Don’t try to devise plotlines involving multiple time travelers and attempt to keep any internal consistency to your story.
Story outline?
Wonder how it goes? :0
“If that’s your idea of fun, then let’s do something funny”
@Background Pony #85EC
I agree (though my BP name script gave you the name Blueberry Tart)
@Voss Corsair
Fire is super effective against bug.
@nightshroud96
This is a plot point in my story outline. It also includes a visceral description (from Celestia’s PoV) of the gold melting and the jewels running down her face.
Well if anything would push Celestia to this point, it would be that.
This is easily the most terrifying comment on this image.
Well played. To you and whatever /mod had the idea.
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But she’s Cakelestia, she’s like The Incredible Hulk:
You wanna know my secret? …I’m always hungry.
Celestia: “Oh my dear little pony, had you just broken into the bit vault I MAY have forgiven you. But no, you broke into my CAKE vault, and in doing so your explosives destroyed ALL of my cakes, some of which are no longer made! I am afraid mercy and forgive just isn’t an option!
Celestia be like “No Worf Effect today or ever, now BURN!”
Well it looks like we’re approaching flash evaporation of the entire room levels of foofed, so that’s fun.
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