[…]
Calamity sat on the bed, one ear to the wall as he watched Velvet fret.
“That poor filly. She’s so terribly sad.”
Calamity whinnied. “Sad? Were ya listenin’ t’ the same little pink-painted ball o’ Dash tha’ I was?” Then ing his own earlier confusion, he clarified, “The drug.”
Fo:E - Chapter Nine: The Moral of the Story

Changes made: Littlepip didn’t ask calamity about which “dash” were he talking about, he clarifies it himself. But I felt it was necessary to add that line of dialogue.

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cool art and fun page to read as always
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pip uncloping her lock
luvcas

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absolute banger
This is amazing! I think the change was perfect for a comic medium!
Omg that fish-eye perspective is peak.
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Pip is so cute
This comic is amazing. I love your style for it!
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Radical mare worshipper
My GOAT is still making these HQs? Love it