@Coretz
Preglight Sparkle is unable to move due to colic; I’m sure her mother will find another way to cool her down. I’ve completely forgotten about the horns, actually. But isn’t it a bit more amusing to have a mistake like that in the work? The state Twilight is in, however, isn’t exactly funny…
Have her take a dip in a cool bath or stream right away. Poor Twi.
semi-grimdark: I’d rather she miscarry than die during birth, though of course I’d most prefer that she and her foal both come out of this in good health
(Oh, you forgot to have her horn glow while telekineting the thermometer)
Preglight Sparkle is unable to move due to colic; I’m sure her mother will find another way to cool her down. I’ve completely forgotten about the horns, actually. But isn’t it a bit more amusing to have a mistake like that in the work? The state Twilight is in, however, isn’t exactly funny…
If you take a close look at my other works featuring Twilight Sparkle, you might just get a bit of an idea.
Why is she sick?
What has placed her in this precarious position?
I wish for her to live for many moons
Whether Twilight Sparkle lives or dies depends on your wish.