Gotcha. Explained my thought process in the response. This is totally becoming a circular argument. No worries ^^
Please try to avoid opening by just calling something “shitty” in the future, not to spare feelings, but because it doesn’t mean anything. It’s okee to disagree, I just can’t really get anything out of that. Thanks again for your criticism.
I feel like “show, don’t tell” could go a long way here. Fits a lot better to draw someone shaking their head than someone narrating what some offscreen character is doing.
Gotcha. Kinda agree and kinda don’t, but dig where you’re coming from. It’s a single character sketch, so just Derpy, though for a few bucks I probably could’ve added another in.
The idea was not to know who’s in control. Not only that, I kinda tried (well, hoped) the audience would process it like Derpy – shake of the head means the request might not be grantable right now… no, actually it’s just plain not happening. Great ^^
I feel like “show, don’t tell” could go a long way here. Fits a lot better to draw someone shaking their head than someone narrating what some offscreen character is doing.
Gotcha. Explained my thought process in the response. This is totally becoming a circular argument. No worries ^^
Please try to avoid opening by just calling something “shitty” in the future, not to spare feelings, but because it doesn’t mean anything. It’s okee to disagree, I just can’t really get anything out of that. Thanks again for your criticism.
Peace!
@wayward
he makes that point a lot better
Gotcha. Pretty to the point ^^
Still make no apologies for the dialogue.
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May I please get the key? I really have to go…
( A PICTURE OF THE HAND WAVING A FINGER )
okay…
Heh, fair enough. How would you have written it?
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well, whoever drew this image could’ve TRIED to make it at least able. I can’t excuse the dialogue.
Thanks for the critique, but I did not draw this image. Also, who’s to say it’s a guy?
Anywho, if ya don’t like the dialogue, no worries. Can’t please everyone ^^
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you coulda just drawn the guy’s hand pointing. would’ve saved you from the shitty dialogue
Gotcha. Kinda agree and kinda don’t, but dig where you’re coming from. It’s a single character sketch, so just Derpy, though for a few bucks I probably could’ve added another in.
The idea was not to know who’s in control. Not only that, I kinda tried (well, hoped) the audience would process it like Derpy – shake of the head means the request might not be grantable right now… no, actually it’s just plain not happening. Great ^^
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