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thps48
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@Background Pony #DBA1
It may be more accurate to say authors. All of them. I wish I was joking. XD
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@bdavid19
The author went nutso, but you aren’t missing very much.
The main link seems to have gone offline, do anyone knows a way around it so I still may be able to check out the fic?
Thank you very much guys in advance.
thps48
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@Starswirl  
Yeah… ^3^
@thps48  
Oh, I agree. The idea is good. But even the original version is more believable than the latest season finale; that’s what I was trying to say there.
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@Starswirl  
Actually, I can kind of see that chapter being re-written in a more plausible fashion. Dainn has a part of Discord’s magic, which is definitely strong enough to hold against any individual alicorn, but of course not against the six elements banded together. However, three of the bearers were captured, leaving only Cel, Luna, and Twilight to defend Equestria, who can effectively do just that by themselves depending on the opponent.
 
While Luna was asleep and Twilight was trying to remain hidden in order to better study the enemy, Cel faces Dainn and I’d like to have assumed only having a portion of Discord’s magic wouldn’t be enough to completely overpower Her. Instead, he would simply defend against Her attacks in order to stall before Cadance and Shining make their arrival.
 
Which I’d more expect, considering the caribou mindset in more recent commissions: For generations, male caribou haven’t thought females to have the ability to take care of themselves, and so, they want to protect and care for them. Under this mindset, Dainn would not attack, only defend, because he’d think of Cel as weak, simply because of Her gender.
 
Dainn, using Discord’s magic, successfully defends against Celestia’s onslaught, before Cadance and Shining appear and use the Corrupt Crystal Heart on Canterlot. At this point, I’d better imagine Cel being momentarily stunned by the magic burst, and then immediately afterwards, Dainn knocks it out, puts it in a binding device, and waits for it to regain consciousness before severing its horn. And then, they hold the parade.
 
In this fashion, Cel’s near victory would be more surprising than simply having Her lose all throughout. Celestia’s defeat was really always assured, assuming she couldn’t stop Cadance and Shining. A more believable Dainn would not have the necessary strength, even with a magicked buff, to overpower Cel until his allies were able to counter with the Corrupt Crystal Heart.
@thps48  
To be fair, the last one was really, really bad in that regard. Replace ants with bugs and then you about have it.
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@Background Pony #A842  
That’s probably true. Unfortunately, some fans these days seem to imagine that Celestia couldn’t defend Equestria from a colony of ants since the last few season finales. :L
Background Pony #8432
Pfft If the caribou tried this in the TV series version of Equestria, they’d get their ass handed to them before they could even get a foot in the door…
@Background Pony #CB77  
I will get Delta team together
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@badassgrunt88  
yes! yes! yes!
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@badassgrunt88  
time to killed caribou
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Ayy lmao
@Princess♠Molestia  
Do not worry, for I have sent a..“present” to the Caribou.  
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thps48
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@ichingdivine  
In modern times… In olden times… Well, the important thing is the world is slightly nicer today. :3
@ExtremeLurkerHomeEdition  
“Because when you associate that shit with a reward, then you unconsciously start thinkin’ it’s okay.”
 
And you know this how?
 
I have my own dark fetishes, some involving the characters forced into non-consensual situations, but at no point in my life have I ever thought “Hey, it’ll be great if this were to happen to a REAL person”, because I believe that the human mind is at least intelligent enough to make that distinction.
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@Starswirl  
Frankie says relax. ;3
@thps48  
It’s not been said before, I think, but NNC deserves some serious credit for always keeping his calm. I’ve never once seen him actually get hostile, no matter how much people insulted him.
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@Background Pony #BDD2  
Abandon all logic, ye who enter here.
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@ExtremeLurkerHomeEdition  
I’m guessing, but I believe the story is simply filler. non_creepy does have the cash to com a fic, but… Eh, I don’t know. X3
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@non_creepy_nickname  
I’m suddenly interested. Get to know what I like and you’ll be ultimately comatose from utter bewielderment, though. XD
 
We usually just talk about our fetishes, so… Well, also, real world gender politics; although, that’s mostly me. :3
 
Reminder: I live a Hippie Land, so I’m not going to do anything too drastic I’ve said on this site. <.<
@Eggonaught  
I would, but it’s impossible. I’ve tried. None are more EXTREEEEEEMMME than I. And I like what you and your mandudebros have done with this thread. Anyone ever tell you circlejerk is your color? It brings out your eyes. Positive reinforcement is the new pink, or so I’ve heard.
 
On a slightly less condescending note,  
@Background Pony #BDD2 Never, EVER try to combine a storyline with porn. No one in the history of ever has been able to do that and get a good result. It gets even messier when fetishes get involved.
@Background Pony #BDD2  
Magic makes for an easy life.
 
Also, this isn’t what they do all day. I just have little interest in writing a “day at the caribou office” pic.
Background Pony #7B9E
These Caribou make no sense. Now could they even form any kind of civilization if they only thing on their minds Is having sex all day long. They probably would still living in caves, being afraid of fire.
 
The logic behind this is one big train wreck. Sure, you can write plenty of smut porn about it, but trying to written an actually story is just going to give you a big headache.
@thps48  
Crystal hearts corruption affecting Cadence who is in turn affecting Shining with their connection and proximity